What do you think of this poem?

I cant really relate to it, but I understand. I can fit myself in your position, but its more like picking a movie from the shelf instead of matching same experience and feelings. I can even suspect gaps in my vision. Of course attempt to rewrite the meaning of the message in straight raw words would only spoil the magic and effect. I wonder what holy scripts have the same... difficulty in saving energy in translation. I will only say that you made those tears precious, almost mythological. Someone could want them to be saved and contained as some sort of minor holy relics. I mean only spiritual appreciation. Suffering and tears don't make a holy person, but alone event contains holy essence by its type. Also I can call your poem as garden of life meaning. Maybe not something as powerful as some sort of Eden, but its your spirit sanctuary. Fruit of your contemplation. I like the time flow and much skill in descriptions. You can play with sightings to enhance sensing feelings progress. I guess writing has much in common with painting and its just a different angle or dimension for the same spiritual effect.